Bark Realty Not Only Will Find You A Fantastic Island Home But Will Set Up the AC install…Boat Cleaning and Storing… Pool service…and Cable and Internet hook ups…Lawn cleaning and trimming…pet sitting…and baby sitting for you-

From the Desk of Steve Bark,
10:03: A.M

Dear Home Buyer,

Is your life a little stressful right now?

Moving is always the same old stress nightmare, isn’t it?…

And, If you are like me, you are probably getting very good
at a few things:

Being patient while you find the home that you feel is perfect…worrying about the little details that seemed small but are now Huge!…Screaming on the inside like a teapot ready to explode…Stressed to the max with figuring out life-threatening–yet ingenious–Mission Impossible type ways to haul your stuff to the new home…

Don’t even mention the fact to me all the stuff I have to do once I get in my new sunshine paradise…

…Got to re-wire the TV and Stereo, get new cable & Internet- which always takes longer than those guys say it will- find a good pool person…new bills to set up and new services to install- Arrgh! I can’t even stand a whisper anymore…

Are we insane?

There Has To Be A Better Way
To Find Gulf Paradise…

This is why I created a Realty service to do just that very thing- to quickly and painlessly find beautiful Gulf homes for customers just like you…

…And once you are moved in, I find all the qualified people on the island to jump at a moment’s notice and install all your much-needed services for you-
minus the painful headaches and frustrating detail managing…

Let me explain:

I’ve Been A House-Finding Concierge To 76 Clients- And I’ve Personally Sold
43 Beautiful Gulf Homes…

Right now, as you sit reading this, I’m entering my 25th year as a house-hunting realty concierge for my clients- many of whom order from me time and time again.

It seems that many people come to be afraid, nervous, and exhausted- they tell me that they just can’t seem to find the “right” home for their families, or that they need an expert to show them the perfect second home to invest in…

Why is that?

Simply because they trust my hard-earned reputation and they know I will not rest until they have a dynamite piece of property to call their new home!

…Gulf property is waiting for you to find it- it’s only a matter of days until you do…pristine, luxurious waterfront property on the canal or bay…a quiet hideaway on a sandy tree-lined street- it’s all here, just days away from us finding it together

• I sure wish when I was choosing my home- and moving to my Gulf Coast house that I had access to rock-solid, trustworthy people to come service my home!

• Imagine calling me up…picking up the phone and finding someone who not only knows how to find you a great Gulf home- but someone who understands just what you are going through- and knows the pitfalls and traps to steer you away from. Just think…calling me immediately results in myself and my able staff starting to hunt for your perfect property…

• I don’t stop searching until, after a little while, I find you your perfect home- right after we talk for the first time and I help you outline the property you really want, the ball gets set in motion to get you and your loved ones right next to the water…that’s where you want to be.

• Watch in wonder as your perfect dream home is found- and then all the details along with setting up all your new services are taken care or…

Bark Realty has the safest Rolodex crammed full of highly respectable, reliable service providers…

• Don’t worry about finding a beautiful island home- I’ve helped 356 people do just that, and you will not be the exception to that number!

Let me tell you a short story:

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Lawton Chiles
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The answer to your question is test..test...test. Don't take anyone's word for it - except maybe for someone like Clayton

I can say though that your headline is weak. The opening 'Who Else' is tested and tried but the actual offer lacks the right hook. My mind asked two questions...'why do I want one working for me day and night' and 'wow isn't that going to be costly?'...You don't want to a headline that ask a question that gets answered with anything but yes...and for that the offer has to be utterly irresistable.