Christopher,
I say this with the highest regard for your success, but I don't quite know how to say it gently. Step one: work on your spelling.
Your post is full of spelling errors. As you're studying the marketing side of copywriting, work on some basic skills that make you stand out for all the right reasons.
I do offer mentoring for new copywriters. If you're interested, you can contact me at
results@debholder.com.
Good luck!